On Friday, an intruder damaged the gates of Miranda Kerr and attempted to get inside the beautiful Malibu home. However, her body guard saw and shot the intruder in the head after having a brutal fight with him and getting stabbed in the eye. Both of them are currently in hospital. The intruder was taken to a local hospital but the body guard was airlifted to an A&E department. Luckily, Miranda and her 5 year old son were not at hime during this incident.
This can be compared to the shocking robbery and hostage of Kim Kardashian in Paris around two weeks ago. Kim Kardashian was physically attacked by armed robbers and had over $11 million worth of jewellery stole, however her body guard wasn't seen at all during the incident.
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